I'm proud to announce the release of Venus Online: The Complete Series. It's all the novels in one +250,000-word volume.
Level up. Build your crew. Save the Galaxy.
Byron Jones was just another lonely gamer until saving a mysterious old man earned him a once-in-a-lifetime invite to VENUS ONLINE, the most immersive sci-fi VRMMORPG ever created.
Inside the game, Byron becomes commander of a starship with a crew of beautiful alien women, each with their own skills, secrets, and charms. But paradise becomes a nightmare when he realizes he can’t log out and the galaxy is ruled by Lady Necralia, a cruel warlord who thrives on the suffering of trapped players.
To survive, Byron must grind levels, upgrade his ship, and rally his crew across dangerous worlds. From neon-lit spaceports to war-torn planets, he's on a quest to get strong enough to face Lady Necralia and free the millions of players from her evil empire.
Fans of Ready Player One, Mass Effect, and Star Wars who love LitRPGs with heat, heart, and high stakes will love this series!
This omnibus includes all six novels in the action-packed Venus Online saga, a thrilling blend of space opera, adventure, and LitRPG.
- Venus Online
- Treasure Chest
- Mine Shaft
- Death's Revenge.
- Hard Drive
- Captain's Log
This +250,000-word version has been reformatted and rewritten with expanded scenes and bonus material.
I didn't just want to shovel the books into one document and call it a day, so I've made some major improvements.
Reformatted
The formatting wasn't consistent throughout the series so I've reformatted the whole book to have the same font, spacing, and indentation. It's much easier to read. I also had a habit of capitalizing the first two words of a chapter, left over from my days writing fan fiction. Those have been removed.
Rewritten
I've learned a lot since 2018, particularly when it comes to writing love scenes. I've rewritten some of the love scenes that didn't hold up well, including the first one between Byron and Scarlett.
Before:
They kissed again, and he pushed his tongue into her mouth. She welcomed it, swirling her tongue around his while moaning. As her chest pressed against his, he felt her nipples thicken against him.
After:
They kissed again, and her body pressed closer against his. Her large breasts pushed up against his chest, and his desire for her grew with every second of their touch. He could feel her desire in the way she moaned while she pushed her tongue into his mouth, and that took away his other worry, that she would be a cold machine. She really felt eager to be with him. He slipped his tongue alongside hers, and she welcomed it, swirling her tongue around his while moaning louder. As her chest pressed against his, he felt her nipples thicken against him.
So even if you've already read the series, you'll find something new to enjoy.
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